1. Spelling mistake - "Bamboo will create a javascipt file that will display the current status of the build. This script can then be embedded in an html page." - javascipt should be javascript
2. href="http://ci.radarnetworks.com/bamboo-status.css" css link is wrong - should be styles/bamboo-status.css
3. The template for the script should ideally replace BUILD-KEY with the appropriate build key - just for simpler cut and paste.
4. The page should note that the .js won't be created until the next build completes (it confused me, it will confuse others!)